10H – 11 November 2013 – Last Writing day for Task 2

Today we’ll have our last writing day for Task 2. I will offer two key helps during essay ambulance:

  1. Use your language to build your ethos. There are before-and-after examples of this from a variety of places in the paper. The before examples are from actual students. The after examples are my “rewrites.”
  2. Add specific evidence from the text. Vague paragraphs make vague arguments.

 

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